In Memory
Characters/Pairings: Ed and Al focused, really
Warnings: None
Summary: What would happen if when Hohenheim left, he took Ed with him?
Comments: I had some issues with the story. Mainly, it seems to be making Hohenheim a much more callous guy than he was in the series. It seems to be manga based, so I’m not sure how his characterization differs in that though. That aside, it’s an interesting idea. I think the most interesting part to me, is how Al is viewed as a genius without his brother there. (Yes, that’s an issue with me that I like seeing.) And it’s just an interesting, interesting idea that is fairly well done. I will say this, though. It feels incomplete, even though the author says it’s complete. It feels like something that should be a multi-chapter fic.
One-shot, complete.
